response#3

Instructions for Response #3

Write a two-paragraph response to the following question. Follow the same format used in previous responses. Include a topic sentence, examples and conclusion for each paragraph.

The children's uncle and caretaker, Fofo Kpee, sells them into slavery. How does Fofo's poverty and vanity contribute to his unthinkable actions? Do his pangs of conscience redeem him for you?

Uncle Fofo Kpee, sells two children's into slavery because his poverty and vanity contribute to his unthinkable actions.  He rushed into wanting to be rich badly and end up with consequences.  Fofo business is to transport people over the boarder and get some quick cash in return but it is really dangerous, because doing what he do is illegal and if he was caught; the whole mission is doom. When Fofo Kpee would earn cash it would be put into food and other useful things. He was told that he would make a lots of money and would be able to  leave the poor standard life he was in. He received a Nanfang; a motorcycle as an extra rewards for his first step into the slavery trading business. Fofo Kpee had to learn the hard way that money can't buy everything. 

Do his pangs of conscience redeem him for you? Due to his unthinkable actions and selfish act. He is a man that lied and is not trustworthy. For an example he were supposed to deliver a total of five kids to big guy but he only bought two. Fofo made many promises to everyone and in the end he couldn't  kept his promise. Whatever that he had done in the story which is being unfaithful and being completely dishonest. He do not deserve the right to be with his family or have a family.